Wednesday, October 14, 2009

More "I am.." Pieces by Room 205 Authors

Author: Number 27

I erupt! When I do, people run in fear. Many people think I am a mountain until they feel heat. I am a volcano.

I start out small. I get bigger. Alarms go off when I come. People make plans to get out of their house when I appear. I am fire.

I only get two inches of rain a year. I am hot. Animals can't even survive in me. I am Death Valley.

Author: Number 16

I see people tall, short, skinny, fat. I see all of the buildings. Sometimes they are so tall they hit me in the guts. I am the one who makes the sky radiant. I am the sky.

I keep the planet radiant. I will never go away. I love to be out and shining. The sad part is no one likes me. Everyone yells at me to go behind a cloud. I am the sun.

I fall from above to make sure the grass flourishes. I keep the plants growing. Without me, all of the grass and flowers would die. I do not come everyday. I am rain.

I am on the ground. We always get stepped on. My friend is so scared he never sprouts. Even when it rains, he hides. He only comes out when a worm is in him. We are the grass.

Author: Number 21

I am the sun. I am orange and yellow. I am a helpful resource. I give light and joy. And when I'm gone, we all see twinkling stars and a big peaceful moon. I am the sun.

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