Blog worthy author #28 wrote a great story about the polar bear in his backyard. It goes like this:
I glanced out my window and a polar bear was in my yard. I called my sisters. I told them not to tell anyone. So every day we would watch it from my window. We fed him cereal out of my window.
One day I decided to go out and see if it was friendly. It seemed like it was at first, but then it came charging at me. I ran inside and slammed the door. It was over; I had to tell my mom, but then I thought how it didn't have a name. So I got my sisters. I told them it needs a name. We decided on the name Frank. Frank was a good name.
Then my sisters and I decided it was time to tell mom. So we told her that we had a polar bear living in our backyard. The animal home came and picked Frank up.
Extra Credit Questions:
1. What would you do if you had a polar bear in your backyard? Would you go see if it was friendly?
2. What would you name your polar bear?
3. What would you feed the polar bear?
4. How do you think your parents would react if there was a polar bear in your yard?
Wednesday, January 13, 2010
I glanced out my window and a polar bear was in my yard...
Here is another blog worthy post from author #7. The students were supposed to finish the story about a polar bear in their yard. #7's story goes like this:
I was in my room upstairs, and I glanced out my window and saw a polar bear. At first I was scared to go out again, but once I realized it was friendly I wasn't scared anymore. I got to ride on his back and played fun, cool games.
If I started to get cold he would warm me up by giving me a warm hug. I would also take him on walks when he had a lot of energy. When my mom said, "Time to take him to the zoo", I was sad. I told him I would always come and visit him whenever I could.
Extra Credit Questions:
1. What level of the house was I in?
2. When I got cold what would the polar bear do?
3. How do you think I could tell it was a friendly bear?
4. When I took him to the zoo what do you think I would do to see him again?
I was in my room upstairs, and I glanced out my window and saw a polar bear. At first I was scared to go out again, but once I realized it was friendly I wasn't scared anymore. I got to ride on his back and played fun, cool games.
If I started to get cold he would warm me up by giving me a warm hug. I would also take him on walks when he had a lot of energy. When my mom said, "Time to take him to the zoo", I was sad. I told him I would always come and visit him whenever I could.
Extra Credit Questions:
1. What level of the house was I in?
2. When I got cold what would the polar bear do?
3. How do you think I could tell it was a friendly bear?
4. When I took him to the zoo what do you think I would do to see him again?
Monday, January 11, 2010
I am a tree! This is my life:
Blog worthy! Author #18 wrote about his life as a tree.
My life as a tree is good because I can take people with a swing on me. The rope moves on my arm. In the summer, people climb me and it tickles me when people touch my branches. The most horrible part is the thunder, lightening, and rain. It makes me feel like I have fallen down.
In the fall, October and November, my hair comes out. The worst part is in the winter. It starts snowing and sometimes my branches fall down like lightening. My wood parts start to get cold. Spring is my favorite season because the sun rises, there are birds on my branches, and I start growing again. The worst about spring are the april showers because it rains like crazy. So my life as a tree is good.
Extra Credit Questions:
1. Why are april showers my least favorite part of the spring season?
2. Why don't I like October and November?
3. Why do I like the spring?
4. Why do I like the summer?
My life as a tree is good because I can take people with a swing on me. The rope moves on my arm. In the summer, people climb me and it tickles me when people touch my branches. The most horrible part is the thunder, lightening, and rain. It makes me feel like I have fallen down.
In the fall, October and November, my hair comes out. The worst part is in the winter. It starts snowing and sometimes my branches fall down like lightening. My wood parts start to get cold. Spring is my favorite season because the sun rises, there are birds on my branches, and I start growing again. The worst about spring are the april showers because it rains like crazy. So my life as a tree is good.
Extra Credit Questions:
1. Why are april showers my least favorite part of the spring season?
2. Why don't I like October and November?
3. Why do I like the spring?
4. Why do I like the summer?
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Wednesday, December 16, 2009
Mechanical vs. Standard Pencils
Here's another Blog Worthy journal entry from one of our students in Room 205. This time students were asked to pick a side in the debate "Which type of pencil is better? Mechanical or Standard?
Number 6 did a terrific job making her point in this debate:
Mechanical pencils! They are much better for the environment! Why? What are regular pencils made out of? Wood! Mechanical pencils come with extra lead. But why is it important? First, wood comes from trees so you have to cut down trees to make them. Second, mechanical pencils are made from plastic and can be recycled! And if mechanical pencils come with lead, you don't have to hear that annoying pencil sharpener sound. It'll distract people in school! And if you run out of lead in a mechanical pencil, you can just stick some more lead right in! It also doesn't make you waste money on pencil grips and stuff because mechanical pencils can already come in cool designs! So everyone, vote for mechanical pencils!
Extra Credit Questions:
1. Do you agree now that mechanical pencils are better?
2. Will you stop buying regular pencils and start using mechanical ones?
3. Do you think that if more people used mechanical pencils the environment would be better?
4. Do you think that you will still buy accessories for your pencil?
Number 6 did a terrific job making her point in this debate:
Mechanical pencils! They are much better for the environment! Why? What are regular pencils made out of? Wood! Mechanical pencils come with extra lead. But why is it important? First, wood comes from trees so you have to cut down trees to make them. Second, mechanical pencils are made from plastic and can be recycled! And if mechanical pencils come with lead, you don't have to hear that annoying pencil sharpener sound. It'll distract people in school! And if you run out of lead in a mechanical pencil, you can just stick some more lead right in! It also doesn't make you waste money on pencil grips and stuff because mechanical pencils can already come in cool designs! So everyone, vote for mechanical pencils!
Extra Credit Questions:
1. Do you agree now that mechanical pencils are better?
2. Will you stop buying regular pencils and start using mechanical ones?
3. Do you think that if more people used mechanical pencils the environment would be better?
4. Do you think that you will still buy accessories for your pencil?
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Wednesday, December 2, 2009
I am a Tree
A Blog Worthy Piece by Author # 14
I'm a vast tree towering in the sky.
When harsh winds blow, I sway all around.
In the intense winter I close all openings in my branches.
I am bare.
When time changes to Spring, I grow.
In the blazing summer, I shade people.
When there is a storm you hear "crack".
I have fallen.
My life is over.
Questions/Comments:
1. Who is the "I" in this poem?
2. Which descriptive words help you feel how the tree feels?
3. How do you feel at the beginning of the poem? Do you feel the same at the end?
4. What is your favorite part?
I'm a vast tree towering in the sky.
When harsh winds blow, I sway all around.
In the intense winter I close all openings in my branches.
I am bare.
When time changes to Spring, I grow.
In the blazing summer, I shade people.
When there is a storm you hear "crack".
I have fallen.
My life is over.
Questions/Comments:
1. Who is the "I" in this poem?
2. Which descriptive words help you feel how the tree feels?
3. How do you feel at the beginning of the poem? Do you feel the same at the end?
4. What is your favorite part?
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